... and asking for advice!
And I figure if Raph can pimp his artwork, I can pimp fan fiction... as this is probably an equal-opportunity pimping place. Or whatever.
Anyway, Black Velvet has been my pet phan phiction for, oh... nearly 10 years now. And I still have no idea where to go with the damn story. Yes, it started out as a blatant Mary Sue and still (unfortunately) reads that way. So I am looking for constructive suggestions on how to fix that without losing the entire thing. Which naturally begs the question... are all Erik/OW stories Mary Sues by their very nature?
So if anyone has any suggestions on where to go with the story now. Or how to make it less Mary-Sue-ish. Please tell me.
The story can be found at www.geocities.com/red_vel...omfic.html along with all of my other phan phiction.
Thanks!
Marie Noire
And I figure if Raph can pimp his artwork, I can pimp fan fiction... as this is probably an equal-opportunity pimping place. Or whatever.
Anyway, Black Velvet has been my pet phan phiction for, oh... nearly 10 years now. And I still have no idea where to go with the damn story. Yes, it started out as a blatant Mary Sue and still (unfortunately) reads that way. So I am looking for constructive suggestions on how to fix that without losing the entire thing. Which naturally begs the question... are all Erik/OW stories Mary Sues by their very nature?
So if anyone has any suggestions on where to go with the story now. Or how to make it less Mary-Sue-ish. Please tell me.
The story can be found at www.geocities.com/red_vel...omfic.html along with all of my other phan phiction.
Thanks!
Marie Noire
